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Lillie
Friday, January 6, 2012
Hunger
The foggy haze floating atop the water is thick tonight, a
thin layer of cover, just the way I like it. Sun will be coming up any time
now, so I have to finish hunting soon. That new albino gator who showed up last
week has really been hogging my territory. Wait, there it is, what I’ve been
looking for all night, just standing there waiting. Tourists always make for a
fine feast when the hunger is strong.
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LOL I LOVE this! Great imagery.Glad I'm not overly fond of wildlife tours :-/
ReplyDeleteGators creep me out like no other!
ReplyDeleteGreat post, can't wait to read more of your stuff :)
@Angie Thank you :) Me either...not so much for the bugs or animals that could eat me.
ReplyDelete@Samantha Creepy for sure!! Thanks :)
I hope the 'gator gets some grub...Mmm, I like tourists too...couldn't eat a whole one though...:)
ReplyDeleteHaha! It is a big meal :)
DeleteThose eyes peaking just above the waterline - yikes. In your sentences you can feel the alligator moving steadily along looking for (human) food. Really liked this!
ReplyDeleteThanks! I'm glad you liked it.
DeleteHa! I love this!! Great twist on the word and beautiful details on setting the scene!
ReplyDeleteThank you Stephanie!!!
DeleteThis is great!! Love the detail!
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you!
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DeleteLove this! I always wondered what went through Gator's minds...Lol
ReplyDeleteThank you Meghan :) LOL
Deleteevil, predatory, great sense of threat, but a quirky/ cheeky sense as well
ReplyDeletelovely as always Lillie
Kate