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Lillie
Monday, January 16, 2012
Delirious
Flickers fly from my heated skin, fireflies dancing in the
wind. I am entranced as sparks turn to flames with each caress. We feed the
blaze, mustn’t let it wither to ash carried far and distant by a breeze of chance.
Searching ocean eyes dare me to embrace it, be consumed by it, be bold with it.
Grabbing the frenzied warmth with both hands I close my eyes and let it catch
my heart ablaze.
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Sensual, strong and delicate. Beautiful, Lillie.
ReplyDeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThere's a really strong energy and passion in this, but dreamy as well.
ReplyDeleteI loved that your story was very poetic!
ReplyDeleteThis is just so pretty!
ReplyDeleteIt's almost a poem!
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing for just 5 sentences. Well done :)
ReplyDeleteI agree - almost like a poem.
ReplyDeleteThat's brilliant! Filled with ethereal passion. Well done Lillie :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for all of the awesome comments :)
ReplyDeleteI love the imagery in that, so pretty! BTW, I gave you an award :)
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