Monday, January 16, 2012

Delirious

Flickers fly from my heated skin, fireflies dancing in the wind. I am entranced as sparks turn to flames with each caress. We feed the blaze, mustn’t let it wither to ash carried far and distant by a breeze of chance. Searching ocean eyes dare me to embrace it, be consumed by it, be bold with it. Grabbing the frenzied warmth with both hands I close my eyes and let it catch my heart ablaze.



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Lillie

11 comments:

  1. Sensual, strong and delicate. Beautiful, Lillie.

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  2. There's a really strong energy and passion in this, but dreamy as well.

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  3. I loved that your story was very poetic!

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  4. That was amazing for just 5 sentences. Well done :)

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  5. I agree - almost like a poem.

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  6. That's brilliant! Filled with ethereal passion. Well done Lillie :)

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  7. Thank you for all of the awesome comments :)

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  8. I love the imagery in that, so pretty! BTW, I gave you an award :)

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