Saturday, October 22, 2011

Shenanigans

Amy smiled over her glass of orange juice at Lisa, smug in her ability to dupe her dad once again. Nope, he so didn’t have a clue they’d snuck out of the house last night. In another life, she and Lisa could’ve been cat burglars.

Stifling a giggle as her dad walked into the kitchen, she said, “Morning Dad!”

“You’re grounded,” he replied.

 
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9 comments:

  1. Haha! I love the "You're grounded" part! Priceless! I love how she thinks that she has fooled her father.

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  2. Thank you Stephanie! I was definitely that teenager :)

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  3. Lovely!
    You communicated brilliantly the smugness of the girl and I just love the ending!
    Kate

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  4. Thanks Kate!!! I went over many ways to end it, but I decided simple would probably work. Glad you like it!

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  5. Haha. I loved the arrogance hitting cold parental reality. :)

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  6. Thanks...me too :) I really like the way you put it too! 'cold parental reality'

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  7. hahahahaha, I loved that, so clever!!! I am so going to be that dad in a few years :)

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  8. LOL, brilliant! The all-seeing presence of the parental figure, I love it!

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