Tuesday, February 7, 2012

Shiver

The wave of emotion ripped through me from head to toe, sending shivers down my spine. I narrowed my eyes on him waiting for the laugh that would let me know it was all a big terrible joke.

He stepped closer, taking my hand and said it again!
“But, I’m noisy, messy, unorganized chaos,” I said in exasperation.
“Yes,” he nodded, “and that’s exactly why I love you."
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3 comments:

  1. Steven Paul WatsonFebruary 7, 2012 at 11:31 PM

    Really well done! Read it a couple times to realize what was going on :) (hey, i'm slow sometimes)

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  2. Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)February 8, 2012 at 1:56 AM

    Nice to read a shiver connected to happy excitement! Really sweet story Lillie :))

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  3. StephanieFebruary 8, 2012 at 2:59 PM

    I love it! The beauty of falling in love is a shiver within itself. Well done!

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