Meet me
behind the tree, his note said. Be there at four, written in blue.
I put on the
yellow sundress as he requested, stuff my purse with the amount I owe just in
case things don’t go according to plan.
When I pull
up, he’s standing there looking out at the peaceful lake beyond like it’s an
ordinary day where ordinary things happen.
I wish,
again, that I had a gun, but take a deep breath and focus on the weight of the
knife in my pocket knowing it will be him or me, hoping it’s him.
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Lillie
Wow. Very powerful.
ReplyDeleteOh Lillie, I want to know what lead up to this. Really really enjoyed this!
ReplyDeleteWow, just wow. This is not what you showed me :p This is sooo much better. Really well done. :D
ReplyDeleteChilling! It's amazing what you can do with five little sentences!
ReplyDeleteOkay, this is really amazing. And I really want to know more!
ReplyDeleteWhat a situation. A well constructed piece that leaves us wanting more. good job!
ReplyDeleteOooh! Love this!
ReplyDeleteI love that! You are one talented lady :)
ReplyDeleteYO. Love this. Creepy cool in a most excellent way. :D
ReplyDeleteWhoever that dude is he better run...it's clear she means business :o
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