Martinique watched the nine ladies dancing elegantly across
the polished hardwood floor. Her mouth curved into a smug smirk. She would soon
be the tenth. Poor Elizabeth, the former number ten, had fallen down an entire
flight of stairs last week, leaving her with multiple broken bones and not a
single chance of staying in the show.
Closing her eyes, breathing in the satisfaction, Martinique
smiled. No one saw who pushed Elizabeth down those stairs. It was such a dark
area. Must’ve been an accident, they all said. Martinique knew better. She knew
how to get what she wanted, so that’s what she’d done.
“Ah, Martinique,” the rail thin instructor said, tapping his
fingers together in front of his face. “So happy to have you. You’ve quite
graceful shoes to fill. Come on, let’s see what you’ve got.”
Martinique fought the grimace trembling behind her lips. She
wanted to spit in the man’s face. How dare he treat her like some green, off
the street, dancer? Pushing down the burst of red fury behind her eyes, she
lifted her chin and headed out onto the floor.
First she sprung into her classic chasse, that led to a flurry of perfectly pointed toes as
she executed a flawless sous sous.
She ended with particularly difficult grand
jete, which she nailed. Slowly letting her arms fall from above her head,
she kept her eyes focused triumphantly on the doubting man.
“Is that what you had in mind?” she questioned.
He snapped his fingers at the other nine dancers, who had
pressed in a line against the wall to watch her performance. “Okay, break time
is up, let’s get started.”
She fumed. He didn’t so much as nod at her work. As she took
her position in line, she pondered the ways to make him pay for his disrespect.
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Wow, that dancer has some flame in her! I enjoyed reading, but your main character is quite a mean person. I wonder what she has in mind next...
ReplyDeleteOoh a touch of the Black Swans - those dancers are a mean bunch! Or are they just focused and driven like some writers?!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this piece, very entertaining.
I love this! Very creative Lillie! It also reminded me of the film Black Swan. Great job!
ReplyDeleteVery evil! If I was to write a dance story, I'd never come up with a character like yours, to me dance is beauty and dancers are beautiful... But it's good to have a bit of controversy, makes an interesting story. I love the image you've chosen, too.
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